Thanks.  I’m sorry for letting this story languish for so long.

I’m writing the Sydney chapter now.  As I wrote, it kept getting longer;  looks like there’s more to do in Sydney than I realized.

Anyway, I decided to let this chapter be chapter 10 and I’ve started a new one for their Australian debut.  It will be in 3 parts.  I’m trying to get back in the habit I used to do and have a first draft ready of the next part before I post.

I should have the next part ready to post soon.

second that. I liked the story very much !

Looking forward to your Sidney chapter.

Funny, you should mention the crime aspect. I noticed Tami Smither’s distinct lack of objection when Wanda and Heather stole her clothes, shoes, and bedding. It is little things like this that can ruin or, at least, shake the believability of a fictional story.

I’m glad the author didn’t make Kari naive and gullible like Tami Smithers has been portrayed. Maybe you are right and Kari just doesn’t care about the material possessions. Jessie is pushing a bit hard for Kari not to notice.

I’m all for lasered or electrolysis. Waxing hurts way too much. Sugaring, not as much but still more than laser or electrolysis.

Yes, I realize I wasn’t too clear in the timing of the tournaments, but the events in the story are occurring in autumn.  I checked out the WSL webpages for events, and starting around the end of September they start moving south and west, to Hawaii, South Africa, Mexico, and Australia.

So you are waiting for the Sydney Summer in December when it gets warm enough for her to be naked? My July in Perth was pretty miserable, raining and cold. Sydney in December was awesome, was like our 4th of July. I can just picture her in Elf ears and silver bells, maybe hanging from her nipples.