https://nficstoryboard.com/content/chapter-1-arrival/?utm_source=rss&utm_medium=rss&utm_campaign=chapter-1-arrival Short Stories, Novels, Series Mon, 10 Jul 2023 11:54:27 +0000 hourly 1 https://wordpress.org/?v=5.8.12 https://nficstoryboard.com/content/chapter-1-arrival/#comment-5101 Sun, 02 Jul 2023 00:45:34 +0000 https://nficstoryboard.com/content/chapter-1-arrival/#comment-5101 Interested in where this will go. Conflict emotions of two countries and two cultures.  

]]> https://nficstoryboard.com/content/chapter-1-arrival/#comment-5094 Thu, 29 Jun 2023 01:10:21 +0000 https://nficstoryboard.com/content/chapter-1-arrival/#comment-5094 Great to see this story back! It was one of my favorites. One editing issue: the story constantly jumps between first-person and third-person perspective in a way that’s very jarring. I’d settle on first-person. You don’t usually see the stories in this universe written in first-person, and I think that could be interesting.

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