Comments on: Discovering Melanie Ch. 17.1

By: ReaderMan

ReaderMan — Tue, 20 Apr 2021 21:08:17 +0000

In reply to Cave. I think that Reese having a girlfriend - changes everything. Lol... it’s probably like having a guy look at her like that. Reece was so naughty!

By: ReaderMan

ReaderMan — Tue, 20 Apr 2021 06:06:43 +0000

I doubt it. Reese doesn’t seem THAT devious. But, well… it would be tricky if she pretended to have a girlfriend to keep Melanie relaxed enough to do all that.

By: Cave

Cave — Tue, 20 Apr 2021 05:58:46 +0000

In reply to Pirlouit. You make a very good point here. Being the Only One Naked changes everything.

By: Cave

Cave — Tue, 20 Apr 2021 05:57:01 +0000

In reply to BPClavel. Yes, a loud, in your face smile that you just can't ignore.

“What about your girlfriend?” Melanie asked. That’s exactly what I was wondering the whole time!

Maybe the girlfriend is all made up? ;)

By: Pirlouit

Pirlouit — Tue, 20 Apr 2021 02:29:18 +0000

In reply to Cave. You said. "No big deal ?" I’m not sure. Perhaps no big deal if the two girls are showing something, but here there is only one who show her body. I think that if we have two girls, one naked and one clothed, it’s an unfair situation. The one who is naked has surely a feeling of inferiority, and the one clothed must feel that she has some power over the naked one.

By: BPClavel

BPClavel — Sun, 18 Apr 2021 22:58:55 +0000

Cave,

So glad you found time for this scene. It’s a great little scene – concise, but full of conflict and emotion.

“What about your girlfriend?” Melanie asked.

That’s exactly what I was wondering the whole time!

By the way, I really like the concept of a “quiet smile.” I’m going to have to try and remember that. On that note, a smile could also be loud or noisy, right? Well done!

Blair

By: ReaderMan

ReaderMan — Sat, 17 Apr 2021 21:01:45 +0000

I’m curious about Reece’s girlfriend and what she might do about all this. Plus will Melanie mention what happened to Josy? I wonder if Reese will get Melanie to wear her chemise in the common room. Plus is it see-through? I guess she could be wearing underwear with it, initially. Reese, being into girls, must have been delighted bumping into Melanie that night. Probably Reese had trouble sleeping after that, lol… I guess Josy will like Reese, but not sure if they will meet much.

By: Cave

Cave — Sat, 17 Apr 2021 19:57:38 +0000

In reply to arthwys. Exactly, just two girls, they both have girl parts, so no big deal, right? ;)

By: Cave

Cave — Sat, 17 Apr 2021 19:53:06 +0000

In reply to ReaderMan. Yes, there are similarities, but also big differences. I love the in depth analysis in your comment, as well as the speculations. Will the writer join in on the speculations? If only that were possible...

By: Cave

Cave — Sat, 17 Apr 2021 19:46:02 +0000

In reply to Pirlouit. Indeed, that moment with Josy was special, her first time experiencing nudity in a public setting, and it was with Josy.