Hi Scott,

Thank you for coming back to my story. Yes, it’s mostly an exposure story. It’s true, there’s a danger in getting lost thinking about Mel and Josy getting it on. They’ve done a few things already, and whenever they do, it’s guaranteed to be steamy. Whether I’ll write it lengthy or in a few short sentences, I hope my readers will continue to enjoy the story.

Here: cavethewriter@gmail.com

(You can also find my email address at the bottom of the chapter)

She definitely should have. Missed opportunity, eh? lol

Yes, Josy should’ve held on to Mel’s panties for her 😉

real life got in the way

The same goes for many of us. It’s a pleasant surprise to read your comment, no matter when it appears, and it’s especially nice to know that you’re still enjoying the different dynamics of the story, as well as the special little details.

Best,

Cave

With Josy sitting back down beside her, Melanie felt the weight of all the attention on her. She was intensely glad she’d managed to put her panties back on, but noticed a big problem. In her haste, she had pulled them up too much. They were partially wedged between her folds. With her legs pressed together, the clear shape and outline of her pussy was on display. She thought of crossing her legs, but that wouldn’t solve the problem.

 
I think this was my favorite paragraph!
 
And your remark about having planned the next chapter about Halloween already more than a year ago makes me even more curious about what will happen.

Hi Blair,

I read your comment earlier, but did not yet come around to responding. Even so, I very much enjoy(ed) reading your thoughts and reactions. Thank you.

The next chapter is coming along nicely, and I expect to post it in the following weeks, at the least before Halloween. Perhaps it’s best to just say, it will be posted before end of October.

Let’s hope for more rooftop parties in the future.

Best,
Cave

“So, am I a genius, or what?” Josy asked between mouthfuls.

I fully agree. The perfect venue to take things that next small step.
 

“Ah, aren’t you going to eat any more?” Melanie asked. She wanted those hands otherwise occupied.

A bit hard to know the nature of Josy’s interests (exactly), but Mel definitely has the hots for her friend.
 

Josy smiled. “Even if I did, I wouldn’t know how it feels to you.”

Profound. I like these girls. No dumb blondes in this story!
 

She pressed her legs together, trapping her index fingers against her lips.

Always subtle, this fine tale — the nuances so nicely worded. No other writer would have left that finger there, but I love it. Young girls moving things at the pace that fits who they are.
 

“Doesn’t seem right when you’re wearing something I’m not.”

This line — so Josy. Gotta love her.
 

…that familiar glint in Josy’s eyes.

Ditto.
 

“You’re the streaker duo!”

Ah-ha!
 

“And is it true you two were kissing?”

Probing. To learn if they are lovers or ‘just’ exhibitionists, I imagine.
 

“Why aren’t you wearing pants? “Uhm, I think you know why.” 

I said it already — no dumb blondes in this story.
 

“I think they wouldn’t have minded even if you hadn’t had your panties on.”Melanie’s stomach lurched at the mere idea. “No way.”

I love the pacing — always leaving us wanting more. Like others — absolutely looking forward to Halloween!
 
Your friend,
Blair

Thanks, RM. Hope you like the chapter, but no pressure to read 😉

I’m also looking forward to the next Emi chapter, but understand how life sometimes gets in the way of both reading and writing.