Thank you! Glad you enjoyed this part. It got a bit dark and twisted by the end. Chapter Five isn’t postable on this site so if you did enjoy the darker story line and wanted to see how it turns out, I left a link in the chapter Four comments to the original story

Those women were still out there, and I didn’t want them to hear was I was about to ask.

typo – what

And they were excited for a peek at ME. That honestly made me feel kinda good.

Nice to pepper in some positive stuff too, once in a while. I suspect the hypnosis augmentation will also play a part further on.

When we got to the trail, it was generally wide enough for two people to walk side by side, but with people coming down as we were going up, it meant we spent most of the walk single file. Scott was in front, then Craig, then me and finally Jimmy was last. My brother was wide enough that people walking past us on their way down couldn’t see me until the very last second. They would focus on me, their eyes would widen to the size of teacups, but before they could say something to me, they would see my brother and his friends and quickly look away. 

A very good paragraph. Nice setup to the hiking.

For about a mile, I pretended to be stretching my arms. I pulled my elbows as far back as they could go, which caused my breasts to stand out more firmly. Scott and Jimmy both noticed that one and Craig looked like a deer caught in the headlights, trying to figure out which way to run. Oh, I found a way to tease my brother after all.

Nice to see her having some fun with it finally.

I got that some women didn’t like me being naked, but it was explained to them.

I don’t recall it being explained to them. I guess when they were walking. It’s fine.

“Good, thanks for understanding.” Craig said before turning to Tabitha, “Can you please take my sister home?”“Wait, what?” I asked. While Tabitha and Heidi shared an evil looking glance before announcing, “We’d be happy to!”

The injury is a good way to get those mean girls alone with Annie. I guess this will be the darker turn.

There, I waited to see if Tabitha and Heidi would ever come out…

Not really an ENF tension, but it’s a good worry. And making the reader feel something is the goal with writing. The accident was well done.