Comments on: Interlude https://nficstoryboard.com/content/interlude/?utm_source=rss&utm_medium=rss&utm_campaign=interlude Short Stories, Novels, Series Tue, 27 Apr 2021 02:32:06 +0000 hourly 1 https://wordpress.org/?v=5.8.12 By: ReaderMan https://nficstoryboard.com/content/interlude/#comment-2097 Tue, 27 Apr 2021 02:32:06 +0000 https://nficstoryboard.com/?post_type=wpws_content&p=1797#comment-2097

She opened her mouth slightly as if she were going to say something, but couldn’t think of anything.

Little moments like this, plus dialog, and feelings are the icing on a sex scene – I feel. You seem to have had all of these things. Well done.

]]> By: shmeckle https://nficstoryboard.com/content/interlude/#comment-2094 Mon, 26 Apr 2021 00:39:37 +0000 https://nficstoryboard.com/?post_type=wpws_content&p=1797#comment-2094 In reply to orflash64.

Thanks for reminding me.  I had a short scene I wanted to add at the end of the 9th chapter that addressed that.  I just did that.  I’m glad this site allows editing of already posted stories.

]]> By: orflash64 https://nficstoryboard.com/content/interlude/#comment-2092 Sun, 25 Apr 2021 20:37:32 +0000 https://nficstoryboard.com/?post_type=wpws_content&p=1797#comment-2092 What was Kari wearing on the plane home?

]]> By: Cave https://nficstoryboard.com/content/interlude/#comment-2091 Sun, 25 Apr 2021 19:28:21 +0000 https://nficstoryboard.com/?post_type=wpws_content&p=1797#comment-2091 I’m not sure how to comment without spoiling too much. I liked this little interlude, and hope they are both serious about this. Thankfully it was not alcohol influenced, and I hope also not herbal tea influenced. It did come as a bit of a surprise to me, but I’m happy for them.

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