Chapter 2 – The convenience store
I was standing in the backyard pool of someone I didn’t know and I was caught by the neighbourhood security. Merica and the other girls had abandoned me after persuading me to go skinny-dipping here. With the water reaching just below my shoulders, my breasts were buoyant in the water, but they weren’t big enough to float to the surface.
“Come out of the pool, put your hands up and face me!” The neighbourhood security guard commanded. “You’re in big trouble little missy!”
All this time I was still looking the other direction. I was still in disbelief of what was happening to me. I turned to the side and spotted the pool ladder.
“OK I’m coming out.”
I walked across the pool, towards the ladder, trying to think of something to say or do. While climbing the ladder, I futilely tried to let my wet hair cover my nipples. I knew the length of my hair was just below my shoulders, but knowing some strange man would see me nude imminently, I had to try.
When I was fully out of the pool, I was face to face with the guard, and I had put my hands up in the air. He looked at me straight into my eyes.
“How old are you anyways missy?”
“Twenty.”
His eyes strayed downwards, as if by me saying I was twenty had given him permission to gaze at my body. I was no little girl, but a young woman with an athletic physique. His eyes stopped a while at my nipples, which were starting to get pointy. It was because of the cold water, at least I hoped that was the reason. My face started to turn red again. His eyes then dropped lower to my pussy. While he was examining my body, I noticed there was just one other guard, a female one, a couple of metres away from us. I also noticed that none of them had guns, they only had tasers, which are non-lethal, short ranged weapons.
“We are going to detain you and charge you for trespassing. Too bad your other friends escaped. Marie, you can come and help me with this one here. The others are gone, but we caught an unclothed female.”
He didn’t want to touch me and it wasn’t because he couldn’t. It was an unwritten rule that male guards shouldn’t handle a female perpetrator directly once they were with another female guard. I had seen this rule played out a couple times already. Upon deducing this I made a decision. I was going to flee. This would make me end up in less trouble, and be less embarrassing than complying with them, or so I thought. While he was still inspecting the shape of my pussy, I turned around and shot off!
“Hey, stop or I’ll fire!”
I was literally an athlete, but he was tall and well built. He could possibly catch up to me before I got far. I was just hoping that he would follow the rule and not tackle and take down a naked female.
I reached the wall and used my momentum to jump over it with one colossal leap. I landed in a crouched position on the next side and quickly scanned around the spot where I had landed, but something was missing!
“Oh no! They took my clothes when they ran away!” I said to myself.
I was willing to give them the benefit of the doubt and believe that they took my clothes so that no evidence would be left behind, even though they had abandoned me rather quickly.
Because I had stopped, the male guard had caught up to me. I glanced up to see him behind the wall. His hands were on the trigger and his taser was aimed at me.
“This is your last chance, missy. Stop, and put your hands in the air!”
I ignored his order. I stumbled to my feet and continued sprinting. I heard his taser fire. How close he was to hitting me I would never know, but I didn’t feel any barbs puncture my skin, nor did I feel any electricity shock me.
As I reached across the next side of the street I looked back to see the female guard had only now reached the wall. I continued my dash through an empty housing lot on the next side of the street and into the forest-like park.
After what seemed like five minutes I was almost to the next side. I was out of breath, so I paused for a few moments. I knew they had stopped following me since they reached the wall, but I just couldn’t stop until I had cleared a large enough distance. I looked down at my body. I knew my adrenaline level was high right now, but my body was reacting strangely. I cupped my breasts with my hands. Not only was my nipples erect, but my breasts were firmer than usual. They might even have seemed a little bigger than normal also.
I walked to the tree line and squeezed as much water as possible out of my hair. I also examined the bottom of my feet to make sure I didn’t damage them while running. Everything was ok. I was now at the back of a small convenience store that I and the other swim team girls had driven past earlier today. The forest-like park surrounded this building on three sides, and there was no fence around the perimeter of the land this building was on. Because of how the trees suddenly stopped behind this place, it looked as though it was built by cutting into the park. From my position, I saw part of the road that the fourth side of the store was facing, but I was not that brave to walk along it right now.
There was a small car park between me and the actual store, which had no vehicles parked in it. Almost touching the back of the building were three small dumpsters laid side by side, with an open door to the right of them. By its design, an educated guess is that it was the exit door for staff to carry out garbage.
I scanned the car park again. Nothing was moving and no one was there. I dashed across the asphalt to get my body in between the dumpsters. While running, I had a second thought. Anyone driving past the dumpsters would clearly see me, in my naked glory, so I altered my destination, and I ran into the open door instead.
WHAM! I ran into a dense white and blue object, and fell backward, landing hard on my behind. It took me a few seconds to regain my composure. It was a person I had ran into. She looked around my age, but she had a mature aura about her. She was wearing a white shirt, and a loose blue skirt. The collision had made her fall back too. She was seated on the floor. Both of her knees were bent facing upward, which had made her skirt slide down her thighs. This revealed her hairy ungroomed pussy.
“Why aren’t you wearing panties?” That was an odd question for me to ask, but it was on my mind, and it sort of slipped out.
“My panties? Where’s your clothes?” she replied as she fixed her glasses on her face. To her credit, that was actually the more relevant question.
“I… Ah… it’s a long story, can you help me get some clothes… or at least something to cover myself?”
“Sure, I’ll bring a garbage bag for you, that’s the only thing I think we might have here that you could use.”
As I spoke, I felt a gentle breeze flow across my body. I looked left and I realised I was still in the doorway. I got up and moved forward. I had my hands crossed across my breasts, which was blocking my uncontrollable hardened nipples. I wasn’t worried about her looking at my pussy, as she probably didn’t look at hers much either.
She went into the stockroom at the other end of the corridor and started looking for garbage bags.
“What’s your name anyway? I’m Nadine.” I said as I walked up to her, still covering my breasts.
“Alice.”
I got a proper look at her figure. Alice was slightly shorter than me, with a very slender body. She had a fair complexion and long light brown curly hair. She reminded me of Goldilocks from that British fairy tale. She was an overly innocent and vulnerable person for someone her age.
“Oh no! Janna’s going to kill me!” She said in a worrying but soft voice. “She’ll definitely soak me down.”
“Who is Janna?”
“My co-worker. She’s always mean to me. If I do anything she doesn’t like, she takes me into the toilets and soaks me down.”
This was weird. Why do something like this? Why obsess with wetting down someone?
“Is Janna the reason why you are not wearing underwear?”
“Yes, I don’t like how wet underwear feels on my skin.”
“Why don’t you tell the boss?”
“I’m afraid of what she’ll do to me if I make her get fired!”
That response was a reality check for me. I don’t consider myself brave, but in reality I was probably more courageous than I gave myself credit for. I could easily imagine a harmless looking Alice being attacked by her former co-worker while going home or coming to work.
At this point in time I decided I needed to do something to help Alice, even though I had no idea what it would be. I did not get time to think about this however, as I heard a van drive into the car park behind the store.
“Oh no! She’s back! Quick, go through there and hide somewhere!” Alice said in a panicking voice as she pointed at a door at the next side of the stockroom.
I walked through the door. I was now in a shopping area of the store. The door I had passed through was on the side of the wall facing the last aisle. I waited just outside the door, as I wanted to hear what was happening between Alice and Janna.
After about a minute of waiting, I heard the back door slam.
“You idiot! How many times do I have to tell you to keep the back door closed!”
“Oh, I… I…-”
“Don’t say anything, I don’t want to hear any of your stupid excuses now.”
It seems obvious now, but she forgot about it because I literally ran into her a few minutes ago.
“I hope you finished packing the items on the shelf.”
I glanced up and down the lane. I saw two baskets of goods on the floor. It was what Janna was asking about. It was obvious that they were coming here next, and I needed to hide somewhere. My first instinct was to run out of this store, but I was concerned about Alice. I had enough guilt to last me for weeks already, and leaving Alice here without knowing if she was safe would only add more. Also, I was in my birthday suit and didn’t know what awaited me beyond the front door.
I found another door on the side of the same lane I was in and I entered it. I was in the restroom. There were three cubicle toilets on the right side of the room, and on the opposite side there were three sinks with a large mirror extending across the top of them. Two of the sinks were leaking and had buckets under them catching water. One bucket was overflowing while the other was almost filled.
I looked at them through a crease I left in the door and I finally saw Janna. She had short dark hair and medium toned skin. Janna was physically stronger than an average female her size. Alice, who looked frail next to her, only reached Janna at shoulder height. Janna also wore the same uniform as Alice, but hers was untidy and dirty.
“Can’t I leave you for just one fucking hour and come back and see that you’ve taken care of the store properly?” Janna complained as she was pulling Alice by her shirt sleeve. “You left the back door open, you didn’t restock the shelves and now you are telling me that we are out of garbage bags!”
“Janna… I didn’t…”
“You’re going to pay for this!”
Janna pulled Alice by the collar and they were heading my direction once again. It was pretty obvious what was going to happen next. I ran into the middle cubicle and locked the door behind me. There were slight spaces between the door and cubicle walls, which allowed me to peek through and see what was happening.
Janna barged into the room, towing Alice, and placed her at the end of the room opposite the door. Alice did not budge from where she was deposited. Janna then bent down under the sink and took a bucket. Alice braced herself, as she knew what was going to happen. Splash! Alice was now wet from head to toe!
“Could you have at least waited until it was time to close?”
“I never gave you permission to talk back to me. You keep quiet and take whatever I do, you stupid little fuck!”
Janna walked up to Alice, then I heard a loud smack! Alice’s glasses fall to the floor. I changed my angle and I saw Janna almost lifting Alice off of her feet, holding Alice’s collar by her left hand, with her right hand free.
SMACK! I heard again as I squeezed my eyelids closed tightly. I was feeling her pain.
SMACK! SMACK! I heard. It was becoming too painful, I had to do something!
I burst open the door and I tried to stand in an intimidating manner.
“Leave her alone!”
“Fuck you, I don’t know or even care why you are here, but I’ll do anything with this little bitch that I feel to do!” she told me without looking back.
I had to do something more. She was physically bigger than me, and I, even with clothes on, never looked very threatening. I grabbed the last bucket of water and threw the bucket water at her.
Splash! She turned her head to look back at me. She then noticed that I was actually naked. I wasn’t sure what to expect at this point. I could not beat her in a fight. Was she going to attack me? Was I brave or stupid for doing this? The tension at this moment made my heart beat the same speed it usually does during a race.
Janna turned her head back to face Alice and slowly lowered her back onto her feet, then she covered her face with both of her hands and walked past me and went into the first toilet stall.
“She got what she deserved!” I said, waiting for Alice to agree with me. I actually was more relieved than anything else.
Alice said nothing. She slowly bent down, got ahold of her glasses and secured it on her face. She then patiently walked to the stall where Janna was now in. I trailed her, curious as to what she was actually doing. Alice slowly opened the door, and what was behind the door surprised me.
There was an insecure sobbing girl in there. Janna was seated on the toilet in her wet clothes. He legs were side by side with her arms crossed across them. Rivers were flowing from her eyes. I felt happy, confused and sad, all at the same time. What happened to the bully from a few seconds ago?
“Janna what’s wrong?” Alice compassionately asked.
“Leave me alone!” Janna replied. She was no longer an advantageous adult, she was a hurt child.
“Tell us, we want to help you.”
“You are just like her!” Jana was struggling to talk amidst her sobbing. “You are so wicked to me!”
“Tell us, what did she do.”
She told us the story of a five year old girl whose father had died in a road traffic accident. Her mother was a housewife who was so frustrated that she turned to alcohol to survive her reality. One night a nightmare woke her up and she went to her mother’s room for comfort. Her mother’s door was open, and she heard her mother screaming.
“Mom are you alright?” she shouted as she ran into her mother’s room.
“What the hell is this? Get your child out of here now, I didn’t pay you for this.” she heard the voice of an unknown man in her bed say.
The mother got up off the bed. She was undressed. She took her daughter to their broken down shower where they always had a full bucket of water to bathe. The mother was not in her best frame of mind at this point in time. She was interrupted during an event she wanted to finish quickly, and she was also intoxicated.
“Sweetie, if you want us to have food to eat next week, you have to leave me alone till in the morning!”
“Mom, come and sleep with me for a few minutes please.” the girl pleaded, unable to figure out what her mother was doing.
“Listen! You wait right here and …” before this line could be finished, the mother threw the bucket of water at her daughter. It soaked down her daughter’s whole body.
“I don’t have time to talk! Just wait here!” Her mother screamed at her.
That night her daughter became more fearful of reality than her dreams. The mother left her daughter in the shower and returned to her room. The daughter was too frightened to move and fell asleep right there wearing her wet clothes. The mother never came back to check on her that night.
This may have been the first time, but it soon became the norm. The mother would start inviting men over to her house earlier, and earlier, and when she did, she would come over to the daughter’s room naked and send her to the shower. She would be naked already when the men arrived to save time. On certain nights, without any discernible reason, she would throw a bucket of water to soak down her daughter, and not let her move from the bathroom.
A normal person would have just been annoyed about getting wet, but because of her trauma, she had a breakdown. Bullying Alice, and whoever else she did in the past was just a coping mechanism for her, just as it was for her mother. None of these actions were right on any level, but things like these happen.
Alice unbuttoned her shirt. Plop, the wet shirt fell to the floor. I saw her pair of really cute petite breasts, with some pretty pinkish-brown nipples. What was she doing? Her wet skirt then fell also.
“Don’t do that.” Janna faintly muttered.
“Take off your wet clothes Janna, you can get sick.”
I understood now what she was doing. It’s what Janna needed. Janna started to smile and took off her shirt and skirt. She wasn’t wearing any underwear either. Janna’s breasts were about the same size as mine, and contained large dark brown nipples.
These two buck naked girls then hugged each other warmly. It was a hug that shows someone that you love them. Not necessarily romantic love, but human love.
“Can we be friends from now on Alice?”
“Yes, but you need to get more help to overcome your trauma.”
“I will, especially since my friend recommends it.”
At this point in time I was happy for both of them. The thought of someone walking into this bathroom now crossed my mind. There were three bare-assed girls, with two of them hugging. I ignored this thought and enjoyed the moment.
“What I did to you these last few weeks was wrong. I’ll make it up to you I promise.”
“I think we should close up for tonight, too many things have happened already. We’ll tell Sue that we both got soaked down trying to adjust the leaking taps in the restroom.” Alice suggested. Sue was apparently the owner of this convenience store.
“Ok, you lock the door and I’ll get the panel van. I’ll go home with it tonight after dropping off the two of you.”
Janna turned to face me.
“Where are your clothes?”
“That’s a long story.”
“OK, you can tell us while we’re dropping you home.”
It was now about 8:35 pm and we were heading along the Wrightson Highway into Spainport. We were all naked in the van, including Janna, who was driving. It was dark, no one would see her properly. Alice and I, as well as their wet clothes, were in the back of the van.
Pop! I heard as I felt the van jerk. Janna pulled aside and stopped.
“OK we have a problem! We have a flat, and we don’t have a spare. I was supposed to get back one from our lessor, but I didn’t have time yesterday to check them.”
“So what’s going to happen now?” I asked Janna.
“We’ll have to call for a tow, they’ll drop us home, and take the van to a garage. We are safe here until they reach, but they’ll take a while.”
There was one major problem with that. I was totally unclothed and unlike Alice and Janna, I had nothing to put on when help reached. I started imagining the tow truck driver and their assistant staring down my naked body. I already had a man and a couple females examine my body today already.
I then looked outside through the windscreen of the vehicle’s cabin and noticed that this place looked familiar.
“Miki! My friend who I just told you about, lives very close to here.”
I glanced at Alice and Janna, who had now climbed into the back of the van. I then glanced down at myself. My nipples were no longer erect even though a slight blush had come over my body. I started to think about doing something a little crazy. I had already instigated a lot of positive changes in the lives of both Alice and Janna tonight. However they did not need me anymore at this moment. I had helped them, and they had helped me to reach halfway to home. There was someone that could help me more than they could right now. Miki was literally a few houses away. It was night time and I could hide in the shadows and make it to her. I also needed to urgently apologise to her and Steffanie.
“I’m leaving you here.” I explained, while pointing at the tall walls a few metres away from the side of the van. “I can get to her once I get over that wall.”
This wall was built to help reduce the noise pollution from the highway, and it spanned a few kilometres in either direction along the road from the position where we were presently.
“Just wait, we’ll hide you in the van when they reach, and we’ll think of something so they wouldn’t search the back.” Alice said, trying to convince me.
Deep down I think she really knew that this would not work. They always do a thorough inspection of all automobiles before they tow it. My mind was made up already anyway.
I stood up, and put my hand on the door handle. I was breathing heavy. I stopped, closed my eyes and slowed my breathing. It was a technique I always used before important races to calm my nervousness.
“I’ll pass by and check you back sometime to see how you are going,” I told them and they both nodded.
I opened the door and sprinted towards the wall. When I had reached it, I used my running momentum to jump as high as I could and my palms barely held onto the top of the wall. Even though I was not that muscular, my sheer determination was enough for me to pull myself up this time. I would not be able to scale another wall this high again tonight. As I sat on top of the wall, I looked back at the van. Alice and Janna were looking back at me. I raised my hand and waved goodbye to them. I was leaving them for the rest of the night. I turned my head, watched the ground on the next side of the wall and jumped down. This was the backyard of a house on the same street as my friend. I was now on a one way trip to Miki’s house.
—> Please tell me what you think of this story in the comments below. It was very experimental for me (writing a traumatic backstory, bullying etc) while still keeping it as an ENF story. How well did I do?
Oh a nice large chapter. Looking forward to reading this after work!
The story and entire chapter was very touching. I am excited to read more.
Read nicely. It keeps my interest.
I liked this sentence, and the entire paragraph.
Good start, lots of action.
I feel that they abandoned her.
You summarized five entire minutes of her running around a park naked? That feels like a missed opportunity. I’d milk it a bit. Five minutes naked should at least warrant a few paragraphs.
Her breasts started inflating suddenly?! Oh my god.
There was still water in her hair after 5 minutes of running?
Nice description. So far this is an excellent start.
Funny moment.
A bit hard to swallow since she’s naked and being chased by guards. And someone might come into the store. But okay, I’ll go with it. Maybe emphasize that she could finally calm down and that the guards are long gone. Also have her try to look for something to wear first?
It’s interesting that a this point she wants to help, despite all the risk.
Nice bully scene. A lot of tension and action up to this point.
Even a hillbilly bully would glance back to see who it was. Also Splash! Is more of a sound. Maybe a sentence with water dripping and such would be better.
This is the tail sentence of a really good (except the splash) paragraph, but here you are telling us stuff. Better to just show it. I’m noticing the narrator a bit too much. I mean, nobody thinks like that. We can already see the tension. Her heart can just be racing or something simple like that.
This is a significant moment. Probably be better if you slowed down and made it all more apparent. Or at least… — then
shethe big girl covered her face…bad choice of words… how about ‘hulking bully’
This is a bit fast. At first they might enjoy this or be more surprised or something.
This seems like it could be better worded.
Would it be more interesting if she didn’t say anything? It’s too much information conveyed. But it could work in a tv show. Or maybe a game?
Somehow this doesn’t work for me, as a story, but I guess it could make a fun visual in a game.
lol… I would rather they ran away with her clothes. But then our main character tosses it back to her, because she knows how it feels. But I digress. It’s good fun so far, but this feels like it wouldn’t happen. At least not warmly. I would rather see Alice cringing, and still a bit fearful. But maybe part of her was like how you have her. The point is, it was all a bit fast. People don’t suddenly change that fast. At least slow it down.
Hard to swallow… but okay. Maybe a little less conviction? Try to think of something to make it all more believable.
Rather than just be naked in the van like it’s a common an everyday occurrence, how about they all giggle or something and decide to have a little fun and go for a ride naked while the clothes dry in the back. Build up to it a little. The pace is a bit fast.
Ahh so they were really sore in the first chapter because you were setting this up. I guess they aren’t going to be nice. It’s a bit predictable, but still better than being overly nice I guess. You want them to keep her naked.
Good paragraph.
It’s a good – good-bye moment, but I can’t help but wonder if they are all such good friends now why not offer her a shirt or something? Were they both only wearing a single piece of clothing? What about the work coverall? Despite all the little suggestions (because you asked), there was a lot to like in the chapter. The pace a was a bit fast except flashback (which felt way too long). But the rest was exciting and wild. You could strengthen it a bit with a bit more feeling shown by the main character about various things or before some actions. Like she could wonder how the Alice could suddenly like her bully. Or be afraid of that giant wall. She could feel the wall on her skin. The wind on her wet body. Thanks for sharing. Looking forward to more! Love all the naked action.
Thanks for you comments, this was a very hard story for me to write. After finishing, I re-read this story at least 30 times, and every single time, I changed about 300 – 500 words. It’s tricky trying to tell a compelling story about bullying, as well as a sympathetic villain, while keeping the ENF moments and feel.
Yes. Those are ambitious goals. I probably got carried away with the comments. Hopefully some of it was useful. Good luck with your game.