Mom Beth walked into teen son Joey hey son I was thinking how would you like to go down to the courthouse and register as a lifetime nudist that way you never have to wear ever again. Joey said Mom I love that idea and they got into the car and put on seat belts. they drove to the courthouse and parked. walked into the courthouse took elevator to the lifestyle registration office and Joey walked up to the counter and ask for lifetime nudist lifestyle registration paperwork and it was on a clip board and a pen and Joey filled out all the legal Paper work and handed to rep Emma she scanned it into the system and then took his picture and scanned it all on to id card template then hit done and card printed out and cut off extra plastic and handed it to Joey Emma said thank you for registration enjoy your nude life and they walked out of the court house Joey look beautiful in his nude skin as the sun crossed his body for the first time in 2025.
My friend, please, use punctuation.
And paragraphs.
Stream of consciousness let the words flow as they will. I rather like the structure as it is, reminds me of James Joyce. However paragraphs, punctuation and even, dialog do make writing easier to read especially when it’s any length. Keep writing, you have good ideas. Rikki
Stream of consciousness let the words flow as they will. I rather like the structure as it is. I’m reminded of James Joyce.There are no absolute rules and they are made to be broken however paragraphs, punctuation and even, dialog do make writing easier to read especially when it’s any length. Keep writing, you have good ideas. Rikki
I’m a great fan of Joyce. I’ve even read Finnegans Wake (a long time ago). Joyce once spent a whole day just getting six words in a sentence in the right order.
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