Chapter 1: Bound by Loopholes
The late afternoon sun bore down on Redwood Estate, its rays stretching long across the quiet, tree-lined streets. This neighborhood always felt like a world of its own—meticulously manicured lawns, spotless sidewalks, not the kind of place where trouble brewed. I had patrolled these streets for years, and nothing here ever raised more than an eyebrow.
So, when the call came in about a “disturbance” involving two young women, my first thought was that it was probably nothing. Maybe some neighborhood teens are getting into a squabble or playing their music too loud. But there was something in the dispatcher’s tone that made my gut twist.
“They said it’s… well, you’ll see when you get there,” dispatch had told me, not offering any more details. That should’ve been my first clue that this was going to be anything but routine.
Beside me in the patrol car, Officer Jenna Collins drummed her fingers lightly on her door handle. We’d worked together for a few years now, and she had a good sense of when something was about to go sideways.
“Bet, it’s just some kids being stupid,” Jenna said, glancing at me with a raised brow. “Maybe trying to start a TikTok trend or something.”
I wasn’t so sure. “Maybe,” I muttered, keeping my eyes on the road as we turned onto Sycamore Street. “But let’s stay sharp. Something feels off.” The moment we turned the corner, I saw them.
Two young women—no, girls—stood by the sidewalk in front of a modest house, chatting and laughing like they didn’t have a care in the world. At first, nothing seemed unusual. They were just standing there, completely relaxed, like any other pair of sisters hanging out in their neighborhood. Except for one glaring detail: they weren’t wearing any clothes.
My heart skipped a beat, my mind struggling to catch up with my eyes. “Are they…?”
“Yep,” Jenna said before I could finish. “Naked.”
I blinked hard, trying to make sense of the situation. Twin girls, barely in their late teens, standing completely naked in broad daylight, in the middle of this quiet suburban neighborhood. I could feel the heat rising in my cheeks—not from embarrassment, but from the sheer absurdity of it all.
“What the hell is this?” Jenna muttered, shaking her head. “A protest? A dare?”
“Let’s find out,” I said, stepping out of the car. My hand instinctively went to my utility belt, though what I thought I might need, I had no idea. I walked toward them, trying to project authority even though the scene in front of me was making that harder by the second.
“Good afternoon,” I called out, keeping my voice calm but firm. “I’m Officer Mercer, and this is Officer Collins. Can you tell me what’s going on here?”
Both girls turned to face me at the same time. It was uncanny—like watching synchronized dancers. They were identical in every way: pale, flawless skin, long auburn hair that fell in waves down their backs, and striking green eyes that were now focused squarely on me. They didn’t flinch, didn’t try to cover themselves. They just stood there, utterly composed, as if this was the most normal thing in the world.
“We’re just hanging out,” one of them said casually, a small smile tugging at her lips.
“Is there a problem, Officer?” the other chimed in, her voice soft but carrying the same confidence as her sister.
I had to blink again. This wasn’t real, right? “Yeah, there’s a problem,” I said, trying to regain control of the situation. “You can’t just stand around naked in public. That’s public indecency.”
The first twin, who seemed to be the more talkative of the two, tilted her head and gave me a look like I was the one missing something. “Indecency?” she repeated, her voice light, almost playful. “We’ve been doing this for years. No one’s ever said it’s indecent before.”
Jenna stepped up beside me, arms crossed. “Yeah, well, maybe no one’s called the cops before,” she said, her tone sharp. “This is a public street, not a private beach.”
The second twin gave a small shrug. “We don’t wear clothes. It’s part of our family’s tradition. We haven’t worn them since we were kids. Why would we start now?”
My mind was racing, trying to reconcile what I was hearing. A family tradition? That didn’t make any sense. “You’re telling me,” I said slowly, “that your family just doesn’t wear clothes? In public?”
The first twin nodded, completely unfazed. “Yep. My name’s Elise and this is my sister, Elara. Our family follows a custom that once we finish middle school, we stop wearing clothes until we’re married. It’s a tradition we’ve always followed.”
I opened my mouth to respond, but Jenna beat me to it. “That’s… not possible. You can’t just decide not to follow public decency laws because of some family tradition. It’s illegal.”
Elise—at least, I thought it was Elise—smirked. “It’s not illegal. There’s an exception in the law for cultural practices. You can look it up if you want.”
Jenna and I exchanged a glance, my frustration mounting as I pulled out my phone. There was no way this could be true. But as I scrolled through the ordinance database, my stomach sank. There it was, clear as day: a section of the Public Decency Act that allowed for cultural or social practices to exempt individuals from public nudity laws. My hands tightened around my phone as I felt control of the situation slip right through my fingers.
“Unbelievable,” Jenna muttered under her breath.
Elara stepped forward, her green eyes twinkling with a kind of quiet amusement that only made my frustration worse. “We’re not breaking any laws, Officer Mercer. Our family has been doing this for generations. The whole neighborhood knows. No one’s complained before.”
“That doesn’t make it right,” I shot back, feeling the tension in my voice. “This is still a public space. People live here. Kids live here. You can’t just walk around like this.”
Elise shrugged; her expression unbothered. “We’ve never had a problem with it. And the law’s on our side.”
Jenna let out a low whistle, glancing over at me. “So, what now?”
I didn’t have an answer. I should have. I should’ve been able to take control of this, to assert my authority. But the law was the law, and these girls—these twin sisters—knew it better than I did. My stomach twisted as the reality of it settled in. There wasn’t anything I could do.
“I’ll be filing a report,” I said, the words sounding hollow even to my ears. “We’ll see what my department has to say about this.”
Elara smiled, and it was almost kind. “You do what you need to do, Officer. But we’ll still be here.”
Their soft laughter followed us as Jenna and I walked back to the patrol car, the sound twisting like a knife in my chest. I had come here to enforce the law, to keep order, and instead, I was walking away with the weight of my authority feeling paper-thin.
Jenna glanced over at me as we got back in the car. “This is messed up, Leona,” she said, shaking her head.
I gripped the steering wheel harder than necessary, my knuckles pale against the black leather as I drove away from the scene. Jenna sat beside me, her eyes glued to the window. The twins—the McAllister sisters—kept replaying in my mind, their laughter and carefree demeanor like a haunting echo.
“What are we supposed to do about this?” Jenna finally asked, breaking the silence.
I exhaled sharply, the knot of frustration tightening in my chest. “I don’t know,” I admitted, anger and confusion twisting together. “I’ll file the report, but with that loophole in the law, I don’t see what we can do right now.”
“Feels wrong, doesn’t it?” she said, glancing at me. “I mean, what happens if other families catch on, and suddenly everyone’s claiming it’s some cultural practice? Are we just going to have naked people everywhere?”
The thought sent a shiver down my spine. I couldn’t help but imagine how my teenage daughter, Lily, would feel about this situation. She was just fifteen—right around the same age as those twins. I couldn’t picture her casually strolling around naked in public, especially not in our quiet suburban neighborhood. If she were to see the McAllister girls, would she feel pressured to conform? To be like them? The idea filled me with dread.
“I’ll talk to the chief,” I said, trying to maintain my focus. “Maybe there’s something we can push back on. Maybe the community has more say in this than the law lets on.”
“Let’s hope so,” Jenna muttered. “Because if not, this could get out of hand real fast.”
Later that evening, after the paperwork was filed and the shift was over, I found myself staring blankly at the television. The familiar hum of the news anchor droned in the background, but my mind was far away. My home, a modest two-story on the outskirts of Redwood, felt empty and still, a stark contrast to the chaos brewing in my mind.
My husband, Ryan, would be home soon. I could already picture him trudging through the front door, his work boots clomping on the wooden floor, a weary smile lighting up his rugged face. Ryan had a way of making even the longest days feel manageable. He was in his late thirties, with tousled dark hair flecked with silver, deep-set brown eyes that seemed to see right through me, and a strong build that spoke of years spent in manual labor as a contractor. He was dependable, always knowing how to fix things—not just around the house, but also when it came to my emotional highs and lows.
Just as I thought about him, I heard the familiar sound of the garage door opening. I got up, the weight of my thoughts pressing down on me, and met him at the door.
“Hey, how was work?” I asked, forcing a smile.
“Long day, but I’m glad to be home,” he replied, wrapping his arms around me and pulling me close. His warmth wrapped around me like a shield, and for a moment, I felt the tension begin to ease. “How about you?”
I hesitated, the memories of the twins flashing in my mind. “You know, the usual,” I said, trying to keep my tone light. “But we had a bit of a situation today.”
Ryan raised an eyebrow, his expression shifting to one of concern. “What kind of situation?”
I led him into the kitchen, where the aroma of the dinner I had started earlier hung in the air. I leaned against the counter, crossing my arms, trying to find the right words. “I got called to a disturbance at Redwood Estate. You know, the McAllister twins?”
“Yeah, I’ve seen them around. What happened?” His brow furrowed.
“They were… naked. Just standing in the street without a care in the world.” I watched his face for a reaction, and I could see the gears turning in his mind.
“Wait, what?” Ryan’s voice was incredulous. “Naked? In public?”
I nodded, feeling the frustration boil inside me. “They claimed it’s some cultural tradition or practice. I thought it was a joke at first, but then they started throwing around legal jargon. There’s a loophole that protects cultural practices, and now I’m worried this could spiral out of control.”
“Damn,” Ryan muttered, rubbing the back of his neck. “That’s wild. What are you going to do about it?”
I sighed, my shoulders slumping. “I don’t know. I’m meeting with the chief tomorrow to discuss it further. But it just… it feels wrong. What if Lily sees them? What if she feels like she needs to conform to whatever this is?” My voice trembled slightly as I spoke.
Ryan stepped closer, placing his hands on my shoulders and grounding me. “You’ve raised her to think for herself, Leona. She knows right from wrong. You just need to talk to her about this if it ever comes up. Keep the lines of communication open.”
His reassurance helped, but my anxiety still bubbled beneath the surface. “I know, but this feels different. What if it becomes a trend? I just want to protect her from feeling pressured by these girls—or anyone else—into thinking this is okay.”
“I get it,” he said softly. “You want her to have her freedom, but you also want her to feel safe. That’s a tough balance.”
I leaned into him, taking comfort in his presence. “I just wish I could control the situation better.”
“You can’t control everything, babe,” he replied, brushing a strand of hair behind my ear. “But you can teach her to navigate it. That’s what matters.”
I took a deep breath, grateful for his perspective. “You’re right. I just hope it doesn’t escalate. I’d hate for her to have to deal with this kind of pressure.”
As we moved into the dining room to eat, I couldn’t shake the feeling of unease. I wanted to talk to Lily about it, but how do you explain the complexities of adulthood to a teenager without scaring her? I knew I’d have to find a way to address it, to make sure she felt supported and safe no matter what.
The next morning, I stood outside Chief Daniels’ office, my stomach churning with anxiety. I could hear my mother’s voice in my head, reminding me to keep my composure no matter how frustrated I felt. I had to be strong—for my family, for my job, for Lily.
“Come in,” Daniels’ voice called from the other side of the door when I knocked.
I walked in and immediately felt the weight of his gaze. Chief Daniels was a no-nonsense type, the kind of officer who’d seen it all and wasn’t easily rattled. His salt-and-pepper hair and stern expression made it clear that this conversation wasn’t going to be casual.
“Mercer, have a seat,” he said, motioning to the chair across from his desk.
I sat, trying to keep my posture relaxed even though my nerves were on edge.
“I’ve read the report you and Collins filed about the incident with the McAllister twins,” he began, folding his hands on the desk. “Interesting case, to say the least.”
“Yes, sir,” I replied, my voice steadier than I felt.
Daniels leaned back in his chair, his eyes narrowing slightly. “I’ve been aware of that family for a while now. The parents came to us years ago with the same explanation—cultural practice, family tradition, whatever you want to call it. At the time, it didn’t seem to be an issue. They kept mostly to themselves, and no one in the community raised a fuss.”
“So why now?” I asked, trying to keep my frustration in check. “It feels like they’re pushing boundaries.”
Daniels nodded slowly. “That’s the problem. Up until now, they’ve kept their so-called tradition behind closed doors. But with those girls getting older and more… public, it’s a different story. We’re hearing from neighbors who are starting to feel uncomfortable, and frankly, I don’t blame them.”
My heart leaped with hope. “So, can we do something about this?”
He held up a hand. “Not so fast. The law is clear about exemptions for cultural practices. They’re exploiting that loophole, and as much as it frustrates me, there’s not a lot we can do from a legal standpoint—unless they start causing real disturbances.” My shoulders slumped slightly. That wasn’t what I wanted to hear.
“But,” Daniels continued, “this doesn’t mean we let them run the show. We need to handle this delicately. Approach the community, and see how widespread the discomfort is. If enough people come forward, we might have grounds to push for tighter restrictions, maybe even a review of the exemption.”
I nodded. It wasn’t the victory I’d hoped for, but it was something. “I’ll start talking to people, see if we can get the ball rolling.”
Daniels gave me a thin smile. “Good. But Mercer… be careful. Those girls are sharp. They know exactly what they’re doing, and they’ll take advantage of any misstep you make. Don’t let them get under your skin.”
Too late for that, I thought. “Understood, sir,” I said, standing up.
As I left the office, a renewed sense of purpose settled over me. I wasn’t just defending the law; I was defending my daughter’s right to grow up in a safe and supportive environment. The McAllister girls might think they had the upper hand, but I wasn’t about to let two teenagers undermine everything I stood for, especially not when it came to my family.
After all, I was Officer Leona Mercer. And I’d fight for what was right, even if it meant stepping outside of my comfort zone.
Over the rest of the week, Jenna and I dove headfirst into investigating the McAllister family. Each day, we gathered more pieces of the puzzle that painted a troubling picture. We pored over school records, community reports, and any documentation we could find to understand their claimed cultural practices and the legal loopholes they seemed to exploit so effortlessly.
The more I learned, the more my frustration grew. It turned out the McAllisters had indeed been allowed to wear a minimum of clothing—specifically, a light dress and a pair of shoes—while attending school and being out in public. This was a concession the family had reluctantly agreed to when they moved to our area, just before the girls were set to enter senior high. I recalled the chilly mornings in February when I would bundle Lily up in layers before she headed off to school, and the thought of those twins strutting around without any clothing felt increasingly jarring.
As Jenna and I sifted through the documents, we discovered numerous community inquiries had been directed to our station, all echoing the same concerns: the McAllister sisters were often seen parading around their front yard in nothing at all. It was alarming to think that my fellow officers had been receiving these complaints for months, but the situation had escalated in the weeks leading up to our initial encounter with them.
“Look at this,” Jenna said, pointing to a note attached to a report. “Another complaint just came in last week. They’ve spent most of their days outside, making a spectacle of themselves. People are uncomfortable.”
I rubbed my temples, trying to process the implications. “It’s not just about nudity anymore; it’s about how it affects the community. I don’t want my daughter to feel pressured to conform to some misguided sense of freedom. She must understand boundaries.”
“Yeah,” Jenna agreed, her voice tinged with concern. “It’s becoming a spectacle. And we both know teenagers can be impressionable. They might see it as a challenge to authority—your daughter included.”
Excellent first chapter. Looking forward to seeing what comes next.
Amusingly, obviously set in the US, but the picture seems to show a British policewoman. In the UK, you’d be standing on the pavement and the policewomen would be constables or sergeants. (Also, I’ve heard it said that public nudity of itself is not illegal in the UK and a newspaper reporter tested this a few years ago. He did not get arrested.)
This has great promise, right up my street a theme I tried to tackle in ‘<a href=”https://nficstoryboard.com/content/nustock-body-freedom/”>Nustock Body Freedom'</a>, without starting at the beginning of the social changes.I am excitedly looking forward to the next chapter especially as it is in a British setting – my home environment. Yes there are differences between our two cultures and languages are difficult to handle. Where is it meant to be set?Cheers RikkiBare
On the contrary, the terminology in the story was all US – sidewalk, chief, officer, etc. I think only the picture is British.