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Discovering Melanie Ch. 17.1

Content written on April 16, 2021 by Cave
Story Title: Discovering Melanie
Chapter:
Content Type: Embarassment/Humiliation, Positive Naked Feelings
1,101 words (~6 minutes reading time)

Melanie realized that Reese had followed her to her room straight after dinner.

“Oh, hi Reese,” Melanie said. “Come in.”

“Hi Melanie. Are you okay?” Reese asked, coming in and closing the door.

“Yes,” she said, averting her eyes.

“I was thinking, I liked your choice of clothes this morning, but you’d look better in something more elegant than a shirt. Like a chemise. Do you have a chemise?”

“Yes.” Blushing.

“Ah, good. A chemise is much better than a shirt. Or a baby-doll.”

“I don’t know if I can wear such things outside of my own room.”

“Wearing a chemise is about feeling good about yourself. Feeling the soft fabric on your skin. Can I see what you have?”

Melanie went to her closet and searched for her white satin chemise. She took out the loose-fitting undergarment and showed it to Reese.

“That’s pretty. But with your blonde hair and blue eyes, you want something with a little more contrast. Could you model it for me?”

“Put it on? Right now?”

Reese nodded, smiling at her.

Melanie thought about it, but even after that morning’s events, she didn’t feel comfortable doing that, and she shook her head.

“Too much to ask?” Reese had that quiet smile again. “Just hold it up for me.”

Melanie did as she was asked.

“Yes, rose, or aqua will look nice on you. Size S, I think. M will fit you too, but S is better. You did some tanning, but it’s fading. With the tan, you can make the white satin work wonders. Especially with your hair. Are you a natural blonde?” Reese asked as she ran her fingers through Melanie’s shoulder-length sleek hair. “I could not tell since you lack any pubic hair. Do you shave or wax?”

“I… how can you talk about that so casually?” Melanie was stunned.

“Sorry, you don’t need to answer. I’m simply curious,” Reese said with her gentle smile, still touching Melanie’s hair.

Melanie felt tingles running down her back. Reese’s gentle touch of her hair was making her feel relaxed. “I don’t shave,” she said, turning away from Reese and looking down.

“Could you let me see it again?” Reese asked as she ran her hand down the middle of Melanie’s back, intensifying the tingles.

“I don’t know,” Melanie said.

“You know I already saw everything; I just want a closer look.”

As relaxed as Melanie was feeling, she saw nothing wrong with giving Reese another look. Turning back to Reese, she unbuttoned her jeans. Seeing the smile on Reese’s face, she pushed down her jeans and panties to expose just her smooth mound.

Reese dropped to her knees close to Melanie, and asked, “could you lift your blouse a little?”

Though she knew her blouse only came down to her lower abdomen, Melanie pulled the hem up to her belly button.

“No, I don’t see any stubble. It must feel nice when you’re masturbating,” Reese said, and then looked up, “Is this embarrassing?”

“Yes,” Melanie admitted, trying her best to keep her hands from pulling her clothes back into place.

“I see just a few tiny hairs,” Reese said. “You may have to take a look at it again.”

Melanie looked down to see where Reese was looking, and asked, “Where?”

“I… ah… here,” Reese said, pointing. “Can I inspect the rest as well?”

Melanie tensed. She felt herself getting excited by this whole ordeal, but also intrigued by Reese’s supposed or pretended willingness to help inspect her grooming. After considering it for a moment, she pushed her jeans and panties down to her knees. She then pulled her blouse up again.

“Thank you,” Reese said, as she looked again, licking her lips, and turning her head this way and that. She seemed to be performing a thorough inspection.

Melanie was amazed she had let Reese talk her into this, while just ten minutes ago she had refused to model her chemise for her. Somehow, Reese had a calming, relaxing effect on her, only looking, not touching.

“The hairs are few and tiny, barely visible, but it does look like they might be blonde, only slightly darker than your hair. I take it you remove them regularly.”

“Yes,” Melanie said, embarrassed that Reese was looking at her pussy that closely. She looked down at Reese’s fingers mere inches away from her skin. “I will do it tomorrow,” she said as she repositioned her feet for balance.

“You, ah… might be more comfortable if you take off the pants,” Reese suggested. When Melanie didn’t respond, she placed her hands on Melanie’s jeans and asked, “May I?”

Melanie knew she should put a stop to it, the inspection was over. However, she felt lightheaded, a passenger along for an enjoyable ride. It was almost the same feeling as that time in the field when Josy had pulled down her panties. She nodded.

Reese started pulling her jeans down and soon they were around her ankles. As Melanie lifted first one foot and then the next, Reese pulled her jeans and panties off her feet. “There are those beautiful legs again,” Reese said, though she was mostly looking at Melanie’s pussy.

“What about your girlfriend?” Melanie asked.

“Ah, why did you have to remind me?” Reese said, but then she giggled. “No, you’re right. I’m a bad girl. Next time I definitely deserve…”

“What? You deserve what?” Melanie didn’t know what Reese was talking about.

“Ah… please forget I said that,” Reese blushed looking down. After a moment she looked up again and continued, “I should go, but maybe one more look?”

Melanie stood there, naked from the waist down, as Reese kept looking at her. Again, Reese reached out with her fingers, nearly touching her.

“You’re wet,” Reese said.

Melanie blushed. Although she wasn’t surprised, it was too much to hear Reese say it. She turned away and picked up her discarded panties to put them on again.

“You’re amazing, Mel. You’ll make a girl very happy someday,” Reese said behind her.

“I’m not a lesbian,” Melanie said, still unable to turn around and face her.

“Well, at the very least you’re bi,” Reese whispered, touching Melanie’s back between her shoulder blades, triggering another set of tingles. She then added, “Or am I reading this wrong?”

Melanie heard Reese open and close her door as she left, leaving Melanie standing there, pondering Reese’s words.

14 thoughts on “Discovering Melanie Ch. 17.1”

  1. Cave says:
    April 16, 2021 at 12:02 pm

    Sorry, I’ve been busy with work. Only a partial chapter this week. I hope you like it.

    Reply
  2. Pirlouit says:
    April 17, 2021 at 2:38 pm

    A little short but very nice chapter. I definitely prefer when Melanie is with another girl rather than with Brian, but it’s only my opinion.
    This chapter with Resse is awesome, but not as much as those with Josy.
    My favorite remains the moment when Melanie and Josy were in the small clearing, and Josy helped Melanie to found herself completely naked for the first time. And when at the end she said to her:
    “You’re a strange one, Mel, a naked strange one”
    Always taking great pleasure at read this story. Thanks.

    Reply
    1. Cave says:
      April 17, 2021 at 7:46 pm

      Indeed, that moment with Josy was special, her first time experiencing nudity in a public setting, and it was with Josy.

      Reply
  3. ReaderMan says:
    April 17, 2021 at 6:46 pm

    I agree that Melanie has a lot more chemistry with Josy. That is true, but I also found this scene to be fantastic because Reese is almost a stranger and so the trust is weaker and the danger it could end suddenly is much higher. So it’s a tricker balance to write. The air is charged and the tiniest little thing could end it all. This scene also outlined Melanie’s curiosity and bounds so well. Plus the gradual escalation feels realistic. It’s very hard to write pushing someone past their limits in a realistic manner like this.

    “There are those beautiful legs again,” Reese said, though she was mostly looking at Melanie’s pussy.

    Reese is so good at reading Melanie and getting what she wants. It was a gentle back and forth with Melanie initially refusing to even model some clothing, but then we get all the way to here!

    “Well, at the very least you’re bi,” Reese whispered, touching Melanie’s back between her shoulder blades, triggering another set of tingles. She then added, “Or am I reading this wrong?”

    I wonder – is Melanie just getting caught up in the moment? Or is she really bi? I like it best when she doesn’t really know and is just continually discovering herself.
     
    The more unknowns the better. Will she end up with Brian or Josy… or neither and just be friends with benefits with both? Enjoying having two people (or more) push her buttons as she continues to discover what her buttons are.
     
    Will her nude escapades continue to grow and include more people? Will she go too far one day and scale back? Will she discover her sexuality? Will she run naked? Will she end up being a nudist in her dorm room letting her roommates (and their partners) see her? So many great questions!
     
    And it’s always enjoyable when Melanie has no idea about something, but then someone like Reese comes along and pulls our ever curious heroine in some fun new direction. This is a beautiful character study of youthful innocence and simple curiosity, often playfully or lustfully led astray, to the enjoyment of everyone.

    Reply
    1. Cave says:
      April 17, 2021 at 7:53 pm

      Yes, there are similarities, but also big differences. I love the in depth analysis in your comment, as well as the speculations. Will the writer join in on the speculations? If only that were possible…

      Reply
  4. arthwys says:
    April 17, 2021 at 7:23 pm

    Short but good. Very good.
    I liked the almost casual way Reese made Melanie to allow herself to be inspected. No big drama, just one girl showing all to her roommate.
    I wonder what Reese deserves for being a bad girl? ? By just entering Melanie’s room to check if she is a natural blonde, she probably deserves – well, what will it be? Now I am very curious…

    Reply
    1. Cave says:
      April 17, 2021 at 7:57 pm

      Exactly, just two girls, they both have girl parts, so no big deal, right? 😉

      Reply
      1. Pirlouit says:
        April 20, 2021 at 2:29 am

        You said. “No big deal ?” I’m not sure. Perhaps no big deal if the two girls are showing something, but here there is only one who show her body. I think that if we have two girls, one naked and one clothed, it’s an unfair situation. The one who is naked has surely a feeling of inferiority, and the one clothed must feel that she has some power over the naked one.

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        1. Cave says:
          April 20, 2021 at 5:58 am

          You make a very good point here. Being the Only One Naked changes everything.

          Reply
          1. ReaderMan says:
            April 20, 2021 at 9:08 pm

            I think that Reese having a girlfriend – changes everything. Lol… it’s probably like having a guy look at her like that. Reece was so naughty!

            Reply
  5. ReaderMan says:
    April 17, 2021 at 9:01 pm

    I’m curious about Reece’s girlfriend and what she might do about all this. Plus will Melanie mention what happened to Josy? I wonder if Reese will get Melanie to wear her chemise in the common room. Plus is it see-through? I guess she could be wearing underwear with it, initially. Reese, being into girls, must have been delighted bumping into Melanie that night. Probably Reese had trouble sleeping after that, lol… I guess Josy will like Reese, but not sure if they will meet much.

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  6. BPClavel says:
    April 18, 2021 at 10:58 pm

    Cave,

    So glad you found time for this scene. It’s a great little scene – concise, but full of conflict and emotion.

    “What about your girlfriend?” Melanie asked.

    That’s exactly what I was wondering the whole time!

    By the way, I really like the concept of a “quiet smile.”  I’m going to have to try and remember that. On that note, a smile could also be loud or noisy, right? Well done!

    Blair

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    1. Cave says:
      April 20, 2021 at 5:57 am

      Yes, a loud, in your face smile that you just can’t ignore.

      “What about your girlfriend?” Melanie asked.

      That’s exactly what I was wondering the whole time!

      Maybe the girlfriend is all made up? 😉

      Reply
  7. ReaderMan says:
    April 20, 2021 at 6:06 am

    I doubt it. Reese doesn’t seem THAT devious. But, well… it would be tricky if she pretended to have a girlfriend to keep Melanie relaxed enough to do all that. 

    Reply

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