All of the celebrity guest stars are real athletes. The statistics are real but the names are changed. Let’s say the first one to guess gets to name a future sports legend and sport.
4 Beach Volleyball
“Happy, Contacts List Day, Jen!” said Gabi cheerfully prancing up to catering in a very leggy terry cloth robe, her heels clip-clopping as she walked. She offered the stunt coordinator a small paper tab with her phone number printed on it. “Here you go.”
Jen sighed, “Don’t let the guys pick on you like that Sweetie, I’ll get you a robe that at least covers your thighs.”
Gabi nodded in agreement, she understood that Jen thought there was a problem with the robe, but she did not understand what it was.
“Gabi?”
“It’s my favorite robe, I brought it from home.”
“Of course, it is“ Jen chuckled …and why are you giving me your number?”
Now Gabi was confused, “National Contact List day? The crew told me about when they were buying me drinks last night. I’m supposed to give everyone my phone number.”
Jen shook her head, Gabi lived in a very different world. “Gabi, have you ever had to pay for your own dinner?”
“No, why?” Gabi examined a strand of flaxen blonde hair, realization slowly rising in her pretty blue eyes.“O M G! Am I supposed to pay for all that stuff?”
“Just… never mind Gabi, let’s get to work.”
“Okay.” Jen grabbed a donut, may as well make it a cheat day, and they headed for the set. Gabi sincerely asked, “Why is there so much crew here? Even Tucker from UPS has been hanging out all morning. ”
“I’m thinking it has to do with when that robe hits the floor Gabi,” said Jen, keeping an eye on the young actress’s short hemline. “And our distinguished guests.”
Two tall college-age girls were on the set laughing with some of the young crewmen. They wore sunglasses and pink sports bikinis that showed off their well-developed athletic bodies. Director Ed motioned for Gabi to follow him and introduced the MacKenzie Twins. “This is Aiden and Ainsley, WUC Beach Volleyball champions. ”
“Nice to meet you.” said the girl he called Aiden.
“Wow,” she said to the identical sisters. “Are you girls’ sisters?”
The two blondes gave each other mutually annoyed looks. Was she for real? Director Ed said, “They’re Identical Twins.”
“So…” Gabi pondered. “No?”
The MacKenzie girls each took a step toward Gabi but Director Ed stepped in front of them with a clipboard. ”Alright Boobzilla…”
Gabi tilted her head like a puppy “What was that?”
“… as usual you’re going to be playing defense. One Mackenzie is going to set the ball up near the net and the other one will use the trampoline for extra height and spike the ball.”
“Oh, that is going to look neat!” Gabi commented. She was a natural at making men feel like they were the most important thing in the world to her. Director Ed smiled a little, maybe he could impress this pretty girl…
…then he reminded himself. “That bitch would take everything you own in the divorce.”
Gabi blinked her intoxicating blue eyes and tilted her head the other way. “Hmm?”
“Take off your clothes!” Director Ed blurted.
Gabi’s mouth sloped, taken aback. Director Ed collected himself and checked his clipboard for her name. “Let’s see Schlimazel. Gabi, if you would, please take off your robe for us?”
“Oh sure!” the girl said. Gabi revealed her blue bikini as she pulled the robe open, noticing how everyone in the room stopped or slowed as she drew their attention, and handed the dressing gown to Director Ed. It was his turn to drop his jaw. Gabi’s body was milk and honey, soft and gilded.
She was one of those actresses whose roles were limited because of her looks. Gabi was too pretty for Hollywood. She was always going to be the hot dancing girl at the party or the chick in short shorts who dropped the checkered flag to start the street race. She played a beauty contestant more than once.
Gabi would be the funny attractive best friend, but never the romantic lead. Romance movies relied on a love-hate relationship between the lead actors. The audience would never look at Gabi and believe she couldn’t find a date, or that Handsome Dan wasn’t instantly in love with her.
With wide hips and bosom, Gabi was a perfect example of an hourglass body shape. She knew bikini day was coming and dutifully lost a few pounds so that her muscle tone would pop on camera. Her sculpted tummy looked especially good today. Gabi learned the benefits of spray tan back in her cheerleading days and had applied it so that there would be no mischievous visible lines. The bikini itself provided coverage over her broad hips and the expanse of her nicely rounded womanhood.
Gabi heard the Mackenzie twins complaining about the extra looking better than them. She felt the warmth of everyone’s gaze on her bare bronze skin. Feeling naked in front of a lot of people the girl put a hand over her cleavage and the other between her thighs. This was why the crew were hanging around on their days off. The cute blonde blushed “Um..?”
Director Ed lingered a bit longer than the SAG rules permitted, but then he shook himself back to the present and yelled “Action!”
“Oh, we’re already rolling Ed.” Said Cameraman Steve. Ed pointed at one of the Mackenzie’s who had a white ball ready to toss “Ainsley go!”
Gabi took a wide stance ready to move in any direction. The point of the commercial was for her to lose the exchange to make the famous player look good. So on a technicality, block or fail to block, there was nothing she could do wrong.
But what if she spiked it? Gabi thought. What if on this 1st take she went for it and stopped a professional volleyball player in her tracks? She could intercept the Mackenzie girl at the net and hit that ball with everything she had.
It would be even better if Gabi managed to nail the girl in the face or stomach. She didn’t want to hurt anyone, but it would look really funny. They would only lose one take, but Gabi could gain the respect of the Mackenzie Twins and the crew.
Maybe they would even use the footage! As Aiden served the ball to her sister Ainsley, Gabi made the decision to go into business for herself.
Ainsley had her hands entwined into a large fist and received the ball with her forearms. She set the ball a few feet higher than normal, as she and Aiden had practiced so that it would meet Aiden at the apex of her vault off the trampoline.
Aiden was gloriously airborne, the trampoline launching her to touch 17 feet into the air, well beyond her normal 10. Awesome! Ainsley could tell by the huge grin on her sister’s face that she loved being able to fly.
Gabi was on the move, running up to the net, crouching slightly than leaping into the air to touch an impressive 8 feet. Gabi got most of her forearm over the net. She spread herself out preparing to counter-spike that ball into oblivion.
Except that the ball was a man’s height above her, eclipsing the light from the array of parcan’s hanging above and behind Aiden as she soared above her like Superman.
The 21-year-old volleyball champion had one arm straight reaching for the ball and her striking arm bent, hand open, wrist straight. She looked like that statue of Zeus throwing a lightning bolt.
Then Aiden lowered her sighting arm and bent the firing arm so that her elbow was next to her ear and she could grab the back of her own neck.
Finally, as the two arcs, Aiden’s and the ball met, the future Olympian twisted her torso, lashing her arm out like a whip. As Gabi watched from 8 feet below, she herself was 3 off the sand and she realized her folly.
“What have I done?”
Aiden spiked the white volleyball with a resounding thud. Two asteroids clashing in space, one doomed to be destroyed by the other. Gabi imagined lightning and fire as the remaining ember streaked down toward her. If the initial collision was loud. The secondary made the crew cringe as the ball collided like a speeding car…
… right into Gabi’s lower abdomen.
“Guh!” Gabi cried out as volleyball smashed into her belly forcing all the air out of her core. She reached out to Aiden the Angel above her but there was to be no mercy. She fell to the earth abandoned, betrayed, she was Hans Gruber at the end of Die Hard.
The girls hit the sand at about the same time. Gabi sank to her knees and bent backward with her shoulders nearly on the ground, belly stretched out. Aiden was ready to go again.
“It’s still in play! Go, Ainsley!” This time Ainsley took flight from the trampoline, meeting the ball high above the net and joyfully spiking it. She felt like she was playing in space. To keep the ball legal it had to be touched by another player. So she aimed for…
…Gabi’s stomach. The girl was still caught in a backbend straining for breath, contemplating the slow-burning in her tummy, when the volleyball came back into her life. It hit her…
… in the belly. Gabi’s body twitched and she groaned as the air she had retained was forced back out of her. “Oof!”
Aiden again, she and her sister had a Special rhythm that was hard to defend against. Whether it be through some freaky twin magic or simply that they had been teammates since they were 4 years old. With impressive precision, the blonde volleyball player floated up the ball perfectly positioned to spike the ball…
…into the blonde’s poor tummy. “Oof!” Gabi sank her shoulders into the sand, shaking as the volleyball struck her outstretched belly and returned it to Ainsley. Gabi’s body shuddered again as Ainsley scored…
…that’s right on her stomach again. “Oof!”
After keeping the ball in play for a few seconds, the Mackenzie Twins knew they had something special and were getting excited. This is what every volleyball player lived for, getting a long, uninterrupted rally. Ainsley yelled encouragement “Go Aiden!”
“Oof!” Gabi grunted as her gut received and rejected the ball a 5th time.
Aiden was a little too pumped and almost hit Gabi’s stomach at a bad angle so that it wouldn’t come back to them. Ainsley was there as always. She hit the ball extra hard so that it struck Gabi’s solar plexus, popping open the girl’s bra, and returned at a more controllable velocity. “Ooh!”
From there the girls grew silent, relaxed, and determined. They had kept the rally going for 10 exchanges; their best was 15.
“Oof! Oof!” Gabi moaned, hardly aware that her breasts had spilled out, as they tried to beat their personal record. “Ooh!”
15! 20! Could they make 30?
“Oh!” Gabi made it more difficult when she moved a leg to relieve the strain on her back a bit. The girls were able to compensate though, preventing her from turning on her side by driving her back with a volleyball to the stomach. “Ah!”
“Twenty-five!” Ainsley yelled.
“Ooh!” Gabi moaned, getting both legs free so she lay flat on the sand. “Oof!”
“Thirty!” Aiden replied, her voice cracking with anticipation.
The Mackenzie girls had succeeded in making 36 back and forth rallies, Ainsley spiked a 37th but Gabi ruined it by receiving the ball in the little triangle of fabric between her legs and the ball went wild. A new fire erupted in her abdomen, joining but not quite merging with the other.
“Ooohh!” The throbbing pain made her eyes bulge and she rolled onto her side grabbing herself between the legs.
“Okay cut!” Yelled Director Ed angrily. The crew groaned in disappointment, damn it, Gabi!
“I think we could keep it rolling a little bit longer.” CameraMan Steve remarked focusing on Gabi lying topless on her side holding herself.
“Loser.” Aiden and Ainsley expressed their disappointment by kicking sand at Gabi, who responded by writhing in the sand and hugging herself.
Even Jen said “You couldn’t have laid there a little longer Gabi? They would have broken a world record if they made it 40.”
Gabi didn’t have an argument, they were right, she could have done better. Actually, Gabi didn’t say any of that, she just laid there wide-eyed and moaning.
“Whatever,” Jen said, not hiding her disappointment. “We’re going to get drinks with the Mackenzie girls, then I’m going to stay at my place tonight. I’m not breaking up with you, I’m just mad. I’ll see you in the morning.”
Jen shook her head in disappointment and left, Everyone left and turned off the lights. After some time alone in the dark Gabi managed to wheeze “Oh it hurts…”
A great sentence, although I think it’s more pro to say the word two instead. I also like boobzilla and all of Gabi’s body language moves and descriptions. A bit heavy on the stereotype, but still fun. Usually I do narration connected to the main character, but this narration is just describing from nowhere. I’m noticing this now, as I was writing today and thinking about narration style. I’m not saying it’s wrong or anything. I really don’t know that much about narration yet.
yeah right… lol
Nice milking moment, except, I would call parcan’s – lights, so that people don’t have to look it up.
So funny… you certainly know how to bullet-time with action.
Good but the 2 is 2 distracting.
Gotta love your dramatics!
You forgot to show some facial expression or lips making an O or something like that. That’s okay though, nobody’s perfect.
Now you’re pushing the suspension of disbelief.
But we will overlook that considering the effect on her top.
lol
I’m laughing more at the story, than at poor Gabi. I’ll probably never fully understand the BP fetish, but it sure is funny and you write it so amazingly well.
Im starting a grammatical revolution. We will take back our perfectly good numerical characters and use them in our writing! I’m still trying to figure my rules on this. I agree that the two occasions you pointed out did not read right to me. I think it would be.
Well, I think you can’t really teach someone the correct way to tell a story, and I wouldn’t tell you to change anything you do because you are a fine writer. Since I’ve been posting here I’ve been breaking grammar rules a bit. This is Omniscient Third Person narration, meaning I can be in anybody’s head and switch POV as I please. Generally you should stick the main character, as you said, but it’s okay to jump into another body briefly. What matters is clarity.
This vignette was based off of this video Sterlings Best Blocks
Well it is naked fiction site, so I had to make the sacrifice, or rather Gabi did.
I like your sprit. Yes, we writers like to cling on to bad habits sometimes. I’m not too sure why. Blair used to like leaving 2 spaces between sentences and 3 dots… for many different sentence styles. I guess we all have our little quirks that we like to do. But I really did like that sentence. I have too many similar-style sentences. A small handful that I overuse. So I think it’s nice to mix it up sometimes. My grammar is relatively weak, so I try to keep it overly simple most of the time.
I was just commenting on the narration style. Hoping that in mentioning it that you would shed some light. And you did. Much appreciated. I’ve heard of that narration style, I haven’t tried it yet.
I couldn’t agree more.
A funny CGI video, thanks for sharing.