Daughter Kimberly was shopping at the valley view mall with friends jenny and Beth and the walked up to a lifestyle registration Booth and were greeted by rep. Julie hi girls how is your day going? The Girl’s responded great just doing some Christmas shopping. Julie said we are having a 75 percent off Christmas Registration this week. Julie handed them brochure that listed all the lifestyle options and rules on cold weather and what they could wear. Kimberly spoke up i will register right now cool said Julie Please walk into the registration booth and select the lifestyle that you want and fill out the information and hit done on the screen and then card will print out and you pick up the card and walk out of the booth and then donate your clothes. Kimberly walked into the booth and read all the lifestyle options and chose Permanent nudity for life filled out all the legal paper work and hit done. and few minutes later the card printed out of the card slot and Kimberly picked up the card and walked out of the booth and stripped off all her clothes took out wallet and cell phone and house keys. handed them to jenny to hold, then tossed clothes into the donation box.
Part 2. Julie Handed Kimberly a fanny pack to put everything into. thanks Kimberly for your registration today and enjoy your new naked life. her friends decided not to register so they continued on into the mall stop at book store to pick up books there parents wanted for Christmas this year. payed cash and left the book store and Kimberly phone rang it was her mom Cindy hi mom whats up i will come pick you and your friends and we will go out to to eat lunch together. sounds good see you then. Part 2 continued- they arrived at Kimberly favorite placed red dragon they walked in and were greeted by cashier Melanie welcome to red palace thanks oh looks like we have a first naked girl Melanie said food today is free of charge on the house. let me take you to your seats and arrived at table and sat down and Melanie ask the females what would you like to drink this evening? Kimberly said i will take coke please and other girls said same a Kimberly. Okay i will have your drinks right out. Melanie return a few minutes later with the glasses of coke. they decided to do own meal plan and one by one went to get chicken and vegetables and cookies for desert and return to the table and began eating dinner together and finished the group meal , put trash into the trash can and Kimberly left 100.00 Dollar tip for Melanie thanks for great service tonight. p.s. you would look great naked as waitress. from Kimberly.
Part 4. Melanie saw the note from Kimberly and smiled you know she is right and finished her shift and clocked out and got into her car and drove to the registration booth in the park and parked her car and got out walked to the booth and went in and read over all the lifestyle options and selected stripped for life lifestyle registration and filled out all the legal Paperwork on screen and hit done and card came out and she picked it up walked out of the booth and stripped all her clothes off took free fanny pack from the ring in the booth and put her wallet and cell phone in and then snapped it around her waist and walked to the car and got in and put on seat Belt and drove to her apartment in town pulled into the garage and closed it behind her and walked into the apartment and tapped in the security code and her door unlocked and she closed it behind her . Melanie walked to her room with a huge box and began folding her clothes and putting them into the box till all her drawers and closet were empty and walked down to trash shoot and pushed the box and closed it behind her. Walked back into her apartment and took a long hot bath and soaked her muscles after a hard days work. sipping on a glass of wine and enjoying warm water.
Is this being machine translated? I’m just curious about the formatting here.
The concept is exhilarating, yet the writing needs work. Good effort here.
I think this concept has possibilities, but it needs a little work.Don’t be discouraged. Keep writing. You get better the more you do it.
I would like to use this as a start to another story. The same but with a few clarifications and details. If I write it up should I post it here or in another story line with credit?