Daughter Kimberly was shopping at the valley view mall with friends jenny and Beth and the walked up to a lifestyle registration Booth and were greeted by rep. Julie hi girls how is your day going? The Girl’s responded great just doing some Christmas shopping. Julie said we are having a 75 percent off Christmas Registration this week. Julie handed them brochure that listed all the lifestyle options and rules on cold weather and what they could wear. Kimberly spoke up i will register right now cool said Julie Please walk into the registration booth and select the lifestyle that you want and fill out the information and hit done on the screen and then card will print out and you pick up the card and walk out of the booth and then donate your clothes. Kimberly walked into the booth and read all the lifestyle options and chose Permanent nudity for life filled out all the legal paper work and hit done. and few minutes later the card printed out of the card slot and Kimberly picked up the card and walked out of the booth and stripped off all her clothes took out wallet and cell phone and house keys. handed them to jenny to hold, then tossed clothes into the donation box.
Part 2. Julie Handed Kimberly a fanny pack to put everything into. thanks Kimberly for your registration today and enjoy your new naked life. her friends decided not to register so they continued on into the mall stop at book store to pick up books there parents wanted for Christmas this year. payed cash and left the book store and Kimberly phone rang it was her mom Cindy hi mom whats up i will come pick you and your friends and we will go out to to eat lunch together. sounds good see you then. they finished Christmas shopping and waited for Kimberly Mother Cindy to pick them up at mall entrance. Her Mom Arrived and they got into the car and put on seat belts and headed to hamburger hut for lunch. Mom Noticed Kimberly was completely naked yes i am permanently naked here is my new lifestyle id card. Mom said i am not surprised you were always happier naked as a child. they arrived at hamburger hut and walked inside and were greeted by Mandy welcome to hamburger hut right this way lead them to the table and sat down and Mandy asked what would you all like to drink. Kimberly spoke i will take a coke please and Mom Cindy spoke next coke to drink and other two girls had mountain dew to drink. i will have your drinks right out. Mandy returned with the drinks and place them on the table. what would you all like to eat? Kimberly said i would like cheese burger and fries medium well on burger. same for the rest of us okay i will get your order into the kitchen. A Few minutes late Mandy returned with there burgers and fries and refilled there empty glasses. They eat there hamburgers and fries and sipped on cokes and finished lunch put the trash into the trash can.
Part 3. Then Mom Cindy and Kimberly and other Girls got into the car and they drove the girls home. then headed home themselves walked into the house and Kimberly walked into her Bedroom and opened the closet and slowly removed all her clothes from the hangers and placed them into a huge black trash bag and then moved to her underwear drawer and sock drawer and empty them into the black trash Bag and walked out to trash can at the curb tossed the bag in and closed the lid. walked back naked into the house and walked into the kitchen and got can of coke from the fridge and walked into the family room sat on the couch and open her coke. A Few Minutes later Mom Cindy walked into the family room naked and joined her on the couch naked.
awful writing
It’s easy to criticize – more difficult to try writing something yourself. I commend jazz1985 for writing a story and posting it for us and hope they will ignore the comment above.
Sorry. Can somebody tell me how to format my replies?I tried to copy and paste something I prepared on my libreoffice (for the spellingscheck) but when I post it here it just comes out as “word-mesh” without any formatting. It’s just annoying.
Yeah, the software here is a bit funky. Pasting in from some editors will do that.
At least there is a few minutes to edit.
Better written Part 1 can be read here – Kimberly Registers – The Storyboard (nficstoryboard.com)
Nice start for a future longer story, since the story comes across more as an outline. The warm surprise ending gave me a chuckle, while thinking it was appropriately believable. I do have a pet peeve with improper grammar usage and spelling. Please have your story proofread and corrected before submitting it for publication. Thanks.