Chapter 3
It wasn’t until she was driving down her street that Sue thought about her boy friend. Allen was a nice guy. He was her everything. Best friend, confidant, and lover. Sue and Allen met their sophomore year of college. They shared a couple classes together so there were a lot of late nights in the library, helping each other with home work. They’d go for coffee or a movie. Next thing you know they were dating.
But living together happened by accident. After graduation Allen found this great apartment he shared with a friend. This lasted for a little over a year until his roommate found a new girlfriend. When their relationship started to get serious he told Allen they had decided to try living together. Allen was now left with paying the rent and utilities by himself. He knew he’d need to find a new roommate in a hurry to help or possibly loose the apartment.
At about the same time Allen was losing his roommate Sues father’s was offered a promotion at work if he relocated to their Texas branch. This also came with a large pay increase. Sue was devastated when her parents told her. They’d be moving so far away. This was her childhood home. Where she grew up. She learned to ride her bike right on that very sidewalk in front of their house. Had her first kiss with Bobby Mcallister behind the Hillside school in 7th grade. She had childhood friends she’d have to leave behind. And of coarse she was now dating Allen. So when Sue told Allen about her parents moving and her wanting to stay he suggested they live together. This was a big step for Sue. She had always lived with her parents. So this would be her first time living on her own. And first time living with a boy friend.
In the beginning everything was good. They got a along well and the sex was never a problem. This was fine until Sues job changed her hours. She worked for a small company that produced circuit boards. They wanted to expand which meant adding a second shift to their work force doubling their production. The eight employees with the lowest seniority were forced to work this new shift 6pm to 2am. Sue was in that bottom eight, and if that wasn’t bad enough, she was the only girl. The change in hours put a strain on their relationship. Not seeing each other all week left only weekends together.
She walked in the front door to total silence. Allen was long asleep. Sue walked into the kitchen and poured herself a glass of wine. Holding the bottle in one hand and her glass in the other she headed for the living room. Just what she needed after this crazy day. Walking back to the living room Sue got an idea. She untied her skirt and kept walking. She wanted to know how far she had to go for it to fall all the way off. The skirt clung together as it did earlier but after 10 feet the skirt was around her ankles. She felt a chill go down her spine. So this is how close I came to being completely bottomless in front of the guys. Sue left the skirt where it fell and sat down on the couch. Putting her glass and bottle of wine on the table in front of her she picked up the remote and looked for a movie.
Sue couldn’t explain it at first. Ignoring the TV she looked over at the piece of material laying on the floor. The thing that started it all. Sue felt a tingling inside. She ran her hand over her boobs and felt her nipples harden. After giving both nipples the attention they needed she slid her hand down further, over her stomach, passed the top of her panties, down to the crotch where she found herself wet. As Sue rubbed herself she thought about the initial skirt drop. Everyone laughing, the humiliation. Running past Mr. Ellsworth, staring at her like she’d gone mad. When she got to the ladies room the humiliation continued at first. But it was the quick turn around that got her thinking. After checking my skirt I actually rationalized that the panties were bigger than a bikini so it was ok. Then stripping for the guys and putting up with there BS. It was kind of nice to be the center of attention. What the hell has gotten in to me. But she couldn’t deny the excitement she felt right now. Sue slid her other hand up under her shirt feeling her boobs over her bra. Her nipples had never been so hard. Maybe I should go wake up Allen? No he has to get up in a couple hours for work. I can’t do that. No this is a solo mission. It didn’t take much
longer for Sue to have the most powerful orgasm she’s had in a long time. After, she fell asleep waking at 4:30 am. The bottle of wine was empty. Sue picked herself up and walked to the bedroom leaving her mess behind.
Finding Allen sound asleep, snoring away, she stripped to her panties. Sue looked at her reflection in the mirror. Standing there she examined her reflection if the dim light. Her 36C boobs with large areolas and hard nipples, down to her abs. Not a six pack, but not that bad she thought. Sue looked down further to her hips then pulling down her panties a little to her thick hairy bush. Her thighs could use a little work but she approved of what she saw. Maybe this walking around in my underwear won’t be so bad after all. She crawled into bed and was sound asleep fifteen minutes later.
Allen woke to the sound of his alarm at his usual time. He looked next to him and saw Sue in just a pair of panties. Wow she must have been so tired she didn’t even put on a night shirt. She never sleeps like that. As he made his way to the bathroom he almost tripped over something on the floor. What the hell. Reaching down Allen picked up what he recognized as Sue’s skirt. Ok this is weird. After doing his business in the bathroom Allen walked into the living room to catch the news and weather. He stopped in his tracks when he saw the empty wine bottle and glass on the table. And the tv was still on. Must of been one hell of a night he thought. Allen brought the empty bottle and glass to the kitchen then returned to the living room. Settling into the couch he watched the news. As Allen sat there he could feel a wet spot through his boxers. He got up and wiped his hand on the wet spot and brought to his nose. Allen immediately recognized the scent of his girl friends sex. He asked himself, what the happened here last night. Someone must have had a good time.
Allen caught the news and then went to the kitchen to put the coffee on. Next he headed to the bathroom for a shower. After drying off Allen walked into the bedroom to get dressed. Again he tripped over clothes on the floor. Boy he thought, she left a trail everywhere she went. He dressed in his usual jeans and t shirt then went to check on the coffee. He poured himself a cup and sat at the table. Allen tried to put the events of last night together. Ok, wine, strips off her skirt, watches Tv, has more wine, and then masturbates right there on the couch. Sue was one of those sex in the bedroom only types. Having only lived at home with her parents Sue didn’t have the privacy to be adventurous. It took him a while to get her to relax and even come a little out of her shell. Well I guess the shell’s cracked wide open now he thought. After a light breakfast Allen looked in on Sue again. He found her sound asleep. Was that a smile on her face?
Allen started his car and backed out of the driveway. His morning commute led him right past Sue’s work. He looked up at the building and started to think. Could she be screwing around with someone at work? That would explain a lot of what happened last night. No there’s got to be another reason, she wouldn’t do that to me. Would she? It was this distraction that later caused Allen to nearly drive a fork lift into a pallet of stuff on the dock at work.
His boss came out of the office and asked him, hey you all right? Allen just looked at him and yea I’m ok. So what’s up he asked? Your mind doesn’t seem to be in the game today. Allen told him he had some personal problems at home. His boss told him well if you need to go home let me know now. Allen said, yea that might be a good idea. Ok take the rest of the day off. I’ll put you in for sick time.
Allen got in his car and started it up. He saw on the clock. It was almost noon. He thought Sue will be getting up soon. Good maybe then I can find out what the hell is going on. When Allen arrived home Sue was in the shower. He went into the kitchen to grab something to eat. When Sue finished her shower she realized she had only grabbed one towel. She dried herself off then used the towel to put her hair up. She wanted to put the coffee on while she got dressed so she walked into the kitchen butt naked except the towel and flip flops. Sue got the shock of her life. Sitting at the table was her boy friend Allen.
What the hell are you doing home Sue asked? Allen looked at Sue, standing there naked and said well I have a few questions of my own. Like why are you walking around the house naked? Your trail of clothes around the house? The empty bottle of wine? The tv left on? And oh, lets not forget the wet spot on the couch.
Sue was speechless. It took her a minute to find her voice and then she started to talk. And didn’t shut up until she was blubbering like a little girl. She told Allen everything. About falling asleep, the guys untying her skirt and it almost falling off. Running to the ladies room holding onto the skirt. She told him about the different emotions she went through while trying to pull herself together, her boss yelling at her, telling her to work in her underwear, The rationality that it was no different than a bathing suit, She knew they desperately need her job, The strip back at her work bench, The guys harassment, the stripper comments, realizing she actually like the attention and didn’t mind working in her underwear. To coming home and trying the “drop skirt trick” to see what would happen. Only planned on a glass of wine but brought the bottle with her because there was only a little left anyway. And of coarse replaying all of this in her head and having one of the most intense orgasm’s of her life. Then she looked at Allen, finally able to stop crying and with a smile said, too bad you weren’t awake when I got home. You would have definitely gotten lucky.
Allen sat silent, processing all of this information. He wasn’t sure how to take it. She explained everything. He wasn’t sure if he liked it, but he did like Sue being more open.
Sue wasn’t sure what to think until Allen said, so do I get a rain check on that “getting lucky” Sue smiled, grabbed Allens hands and practically dragged him into the bedroom. After some of the best sex they ever had they laid their in each others arms and talked.
Allen asked, so old man Ellsworth actually told you to work in your underwear? Sue thought and said yes, he was yelling at me and said, he said, wait a minute. Sue stopped to think. He said “You want to run around in your underwear? Well that’s just fine by me. From now on you can work in your underwear if you want. You can strip when you come through the door for all I care.”
Allen almost bust a gut laughing at Sue. You mean you didn’t have to strip and you did? Allen was holding his sides he was laughing so hard. Sue Just looked at him, She did feel dumb, but then saw the humor in what she did.
Allen finally got his laughter under control and looked at Sue. But last night he asked? Everything you did, it turned you on, you liked it?
Sue blushed and said, well if earlier wasn’t enough proof we can try again? The couple tested their theory one more time before Sue had to get ready for work.
Allen watched as Sue came out of the shower with one towel wrapped around her head, the other around her body. He watched her move around the room pulling out clothes to get ready. As Sue bent over her ass cheeks were dangerously close to peeking out. Allen asked, SO what are you going to do today? Sue was digging through her dresser looking for something to wear. Somehow forgetting about yesterday and just grabbing anything.
She turned around looking at Allen? What do you mean? Staring at Allen like he had two heads. Oh, you mean what am I going to wear to work? Or more importantly what am I going to wear when I get to work. I haven’t really given that much thought. Do you think Mr. Ellsworth wants me to work in my underwear? Is he really expecting me to strip at the door?
Well yesterday it was you that miss understood what he said. Then he all but came right out and gave you permission to continue working in your underwear. So Allen asked, what do you want to do? We both know you liked it. How do you feel about working in front of all those guys half naked again.
Yes I did like it. All right that’s an understatement, I loved it. But I don’t know if I can work all day dressed like that. Yesterday was just a couple hours. Today would be the whole day. What about going to lunch. The guys are going to have a field day hounding me.
Didn’t you say Mr. Ellsworth put a stop to that Allen asked? And didn’t you say that you were actually all doing more work now because he keeps coming to check on you? Yes your right Sue answered but still, just strip down when I walk in the door?
Did the guys hear any part of Mr. Ellsworth telling to work in your underwear Allen asked? Sue thought back. Not in his office no. But when he came down to the work shop, yes he said I could if I wanted to in front of everyone. But then after he left they guys asked me if I was being forced. They caught on to what he said, just like you did. And what did you say Allen asked? I didn’t answer I just went back to work. So they think, that you think, you have to do this? Yes until you said something Sue said. Now I feel stupid, and turned on at the same time. Allen what do I do? I really did like the attention, well at least some of it. But not all day. I liked that it started as a accident. Well what I thought was an accident. Because I had no control over what happened, And later, because I thought Mr. Ellsworth was ordering me to stay in my underwear I had no choice.
And that’s what turns you on Allen asked? Not just loosing your clothes, but not being able to control it happening. An accident? You didn’t take your clothes off, some else took them off you. Or they fell off, or you were told by some one of authority to take them off. Do you want a quick flash and then cover up? Or a short prolonged exposure like yesterday?
Sue thought, a quick exposure. Like the guys untying my skirt. I didn’t know it was going to happen. So when It did start to fall I really was surprised and embarrassed. What if I get the guys to dare me Sue asked?
What do you mean Allen asked. His full attention on Sue now that her towel fell off. She saw Allen looking at her and knew this is what she wanted. What she wanted to feel again.
Sue tried to put it into words and then started. While the guys were teasing me I made a comment about how if I had planned on taking my close off I would have worn better underwear. Then Bruce put a dollar on my work bench telling me it was customary to tip a stripper when she takes her clothes off. He said I was already half way there.
Shocked at his girl friends comment Allen asked. What did you say to that? I crumbled up the bill and through it at Bruce. So Ralph said he should have given me a five. I told them it would take a lot more than five dollars to get me to take my clothes off.
Wow Allen said, you really got these guys wound up. You need to make a plan before you walk in there or they’ll have you naked before coffee break. …..
I like where this is going. Keep it up. Thanks.
I Love where this is going.
Nice developments and interesting to read a bit more about Sue and Allen’s backgrouds and personality. I wonder what’ll happen next.
Thankyou everyone for the feed back. It encourages me to keep going. Chapter 4 is already started. Now I just need a plan …..
The smaller paragraphs were much better in this section. Your next chapter could benefit from even smaller paragraphs.
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You have a real sense of storytelling. It was pretty good even without dialog. That said, for the sake of growth, maybe set a goal of writing at least one line of dialog in your next chapter. Just to see how you like it.
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I liked this paragraph.
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Allen sat silent, processing all of this information. He wasn’t sure how to take it. She explained everything. He wasn’t sure if he liked it, but he did like Sue being more open.
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For a new writer, your characters sure come to life.
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I like the direction as well.